Monday, February 28, 2011

Descriptive Essay


            No one really knows what you were thinking or what they are thinking. That is why some of us tend to be somebody in order to be understood by others. But have you ever think, why we tend to do this kind of thing? Why we try to be somebody we are not?

           Living here on Earth for almost 17 years, I had already encounter different kind of personality, including the person suffering from what they call “inner turmoil”. I had this friend way back then. She had almost everything that girl could ask for. The wits, the wealth and the beauty. However, she came from a broken family. She’s living with his father who could not take good care of her and who could not be with her for 24/7. Her mom died when she was still at the age of five and only her nanny could take care of her. Due to this situation, she had found what she’s looking for from her friends, from us. Nevertheless, we had noticed that we really does not knew her well. She tends to imitate who we are and she is trying to be someone. And we really feel that she is having a problem that she could not really talk with us. She is hiding something from us. 

            That is why, together with my other friends, we had a talked with her, a talked that would somehow change her and would open her true identity. And that change her. It felt good to have helped someone who is in need. I felt like I have save someone’s life. It made me realize that having a communication with someone is a great help to ease the pain we felt inside.

1 comment:

  1. Here are your scores for the Semi-final exams;
    Question 1 –31/35
    Question 2 –26/30
    Question 3 –15/20
    Points to consider:
    1. Punctuation
    2. Spelling,
    3. Capitalization,
    4. S-V Agreement and Grammar -Miniver Cheevy and Richard Cory is both a person, But have you ever think, why
    5. Your first question for Q3 is not processing the theme of the story. It’s still under analyzing the plot

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